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I don't know about the rest of you, but I vote longer. This is very good and there is so much you could do with it.

Ooh, I love this story! I think you should make it a long one

Because of ADD I would prefer a story that isn't 80 chapters long, but I would love to see this resolved (hopefully happily, since I'm a sucker for happy endings). Please let it be Harry's child, not Voldemort. Poor Draco has so much to get over that he doesn't need that. Can't wait until the next chapter.

Sooo need chapter 20!!! They need someone to find out what spells were used and fast!!! Can a mediwitch figure it out using a diagnostic spell? Or a cursebreaker?

Sooo need chapter 18!!! I'm sure they both hate that is has to be this way but it brought them together! And will keep them together! I just hope it keeps them safe!

Ew, Ew, Ew, Ew, Ew. Didn't I already tell you no on this Ginny thing? We don't talk about She Who Must Not Be Named. We especially don't talk about You Know Who in reference to sex with anyone, especially Harry. I hope this is very clear now. I couldn't even concentrate on any of the rest of the chapter, it was wonderful, I know that much but I kind of forgot all of it while I was running to the bathroom. And I can't read it again because what if my eyes accidentally slide down and I read the You Know Who thing again? I'll be traumatized for weeks rather than days. So no more talk of the G word, and it would be really, amazingly, awesomely, awesome if they had misinterpreted the prophecy. I mean, it would suck in a big way, but it'd be awesome to see how you twisted it to make it mean something else. Anyway, no Root of all Evil anymore, but despite that, fantastic update! More soon please! You rock!

Oh no!!! I sooo need chapter 19!! How did they get into the castle and past the Order? Lucius messed up by not taking Harry! Sooo need more!

Amazing! Absolutely bloody brilliant! I loved it, literally loved it! It's unfortunate that Harry and Draco's moment became "let's get this over with," a truly cringe worthy line, but the alternative was so much better. I'm a little annoyed that Harry's people are so brilliantly incompetent that it took only moments for them to be discovered and caught and I can only assume that Moody had something to do with the almost instantaneous capture. I'm musing that maybe Voldemort will still attempt to get in on this prophecy by allowing his seed to compete with Harry's. It's what I would do. I wouldn't cry 'mercy' just yet, even though, of course, it won't work. Harry and Draco's lovechild, "weapon", seed, baby, whatever you want to call it is well on its way! Yay! I loved this turn of events, quite unexpected, but far more intriguing. Fantastic update, thanks so much! I hope we'll get more soon!

Wow, I really liked Chapter 15! First off you addressed nearly everything I asked about or mentioned in my last few reviews and second I absolutely loved Neville and Luna. I generally don't like when people put "extras" in their stories because I don't feel as if they're used to their full potential and end up detracting rather than adding to the story but your employment was spectacular. And I was so happy to see more of Harry's inner monologue in these two updates as well and I can tell, if Chapter 16 is any indication, that your conception of the child will be beautiful and steamy, a difficult combination to pull off. I'm on the edge of my seat about what Voldemort and Moody are up to, but I suppose I'll have to wait at least one intermediate chapter, huh? Oh well, it's smut, I think I'll live. Haha. Thank you for the fabulous updates, some of your best! I hope we'll get more soon!

Wonderful!!! Sooo need chapter 16!!!!