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This chapter was very nicely done, when I started it, I was like, "Oh, she's going to make a lovely, calm moment between the boys." Which was incredibly smart as I never tire of being reminded of their bond, some dire circumstance always seems to be on the horizon and their relationship is placed on hold because of it. The moment was definitely needed and well placed within the progression of this story. I was surprised as I neared the end and saw that you had somehow managed to keep the heavy 'what's gonna happen' as well as the tenderness between them. It was both agonizing and uplifting. A truly wonderful chapter all around and it shows what a capable writer you are. Hopefully this week will go by quickly and I won't have to agonize for very long, however, this chapter made it quite clear that you are more than capable of writing suspense. Though I hope you won't! Thanks so much for the wonderful update, I hope we'll get more soon!

Sooo need chapter 21!!! Oh poor Draco! Maybe if Harry were to tell him that he loves him. Dunno!

long! nice chap

What I keep wonder about is why they didn't anything about Moody BEFORE he betrayed them. I mean they could prevent him from actions beforehand, stop him and disarm him, but no... They just watched him until he betrayed them all, and thus they all have part in Draco's kidnapping and torture. They all are guilty. I wonder what Draco will say should he find out about Moody, being one who brought death eaters into Hogwarts this time, and about Order being aware of Moody's suspicious behavior and not doing anything.

Note: Now, I need a bit of a vote.
My Vote is Longer fic maybe 30 to 50 chapters. So that you
have enough time to elabrate on how draco gets better,
has the baby and harry's effect on draco.

I love this story and I am REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY hoping that you either continue this story for a long time or make SEVERAL parts to it!! Please update soon!

Oh man, did I call it or did I call it? And I'm sorry but Moody's explanation was beyond lame and I was secretly praying for his early demise. I was honestly surprised that Harry managed to quell what must have been some of the most murderous instincts known to man. Your handling of the Dark Lord was delicately done and I got a happy jolt from Ron's reaction to Draco's disappearance, very well done. And I can only hope that Lucius' previous attempt to rid Harry's seed from Draco proved that it was his genes that were meant to create this child, as well as Harry's clever afterthought to remove the competition. Let's hope it worked! As for your vote, I leave that entirely in your hands as I am torn in both directions. I partly want a fast conclusion so I'll know what happens, like skipping hundreds of pages to read the end of the book, however, I never do that, so if there's more to the story I'll eagerly read and review all while patiently waiting. While you must have some preference, if life is making demands of you that simply cannot be accomplished without laying aside less important things, e.g. this story, then keep it short and satisfying. But if you feel you are capable of committing to the longer version then I see no reason not to, no reader is going to balk at more of this amazing story. Either way I know it will be a spectacular finish and I look forward to reading it! Thank you for the fantastic update that'll have me thinking for days, I hope we'll get more soon! Sorry for my endless droning...

love the story,

Honestly I would love you to continue with this fic, but it is totally your choice. Even if you continue in a sequel its going to be great coz this is a great fic.

I want more of this wonderful story! PLEASE!