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by disgruntledfox

person sanda
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Artemis
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is in the Draco/Harry section... this IS a Drarry story isn't it?

If not, would you mind relabeling it? You're a wonderful writer, but it gets confusing to keep running into mislabled stories.
Thanks,
-Art
person qwerty
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story.
update
person Hine
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be DracoHarry in later chapters? Because if not, then your story is in the wrong section. That being said, I LOVE THIS STORY! This is the first LuciusHarry I've ever enjoyed and I can't wait until the next chapter!!
person Dreiad
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*le sigh!* Your story is so lovely! And incredible erotic! I'm utterly adoring it, I hope you update lots and lots and lots LOL
person Luvdonite
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it. Is Draco coming in after or something? you should've put this in Harry/Lucius
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, no. *Covers her face with her hands and reads the whole chapter through her splayed fingers* You are absolutely diabolical. Why do you have to write so well that I read ships that I don't even like? Do you know how hard it was for me to hold the bile down while I read your lovely, lovely style? I'm definitely skipping the next chapter or at least the smut parts of it. Damn it, why did you have to make it so freakin' interesting that I can't just drop it? Oh well, it was a fantastic chapter even if parts of it were vomit-inducing. I hope we'll get more soon! Maybe you could have Harry meet Draco in the next chapter to make up for the, yuck, Lucius/Harryness. *Shivers* Blurgh. Oh, and I really like that you've involved a lot of the characters just in different capacities, I meant to say that in my first review but the promise of Harry and Lucius took precedence.

Keep up the amazing work!
person alma
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bad Author, BAD BAD Author for stoping there. Good chapter by the way.
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love a good slave fic. please keep up the great work.
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really excited about this story! I can't wait to see where it goes. Until the next chapter! :)