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by jules

person MotekElm
schedule April 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I really enjoyed this long oneshot. Romance, sex, feminism in 1

person WesleyY7
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely story. There were so many aspects of this that I enjoyed. It's always good to see older!Draco/Hermione, and the way they got together her was very believable. I liked the use of letters in the middle to show the passing of time within the narrative.

I don't usually like stories where Ron and the Weasleys are portrayed as the bad guys, but I didn't mind it too much here simply because you put an intelligent take on gender roles in the Wizard World. I especially liked how Hermione pointed out to Harry that while he never forced Ginny to give up a career, he showed her the support that said she could do it.

I also liked the Rose/Scropius friendship. That could almost be another fic in itself; the two best friends getting along at uni together...and maybe something more. :)
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Utopia
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was BRILLIANT! I loved the letters in the midddle, they told the developing story perfectly! Not to mention you did a wonderful job of deflating JKR's epilogue of happily ever after for HG/RW... I do love a fic that does that.

11/10 GREAT WORK, a pleasure to read
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was sweet,i enjoyed it!
person kazfeist
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this over at the exchange as well. :D
person luvhp
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jules, you've done an outstanding job with this one! It was absolutely beautiful! I love how you tied in the few months through the letters and the ending was just beautiful!
You should definately be proud of this one! :)
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I remember reading it on LJ. I hope you continue with this story. please.
person Rosamund
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! So beautifully awesome! When I read the summary I thought you meant their children together, but then thought WAIT...what if the children are Rose and Scorpius?!! So I read, and was delighted! Ron the neanderthal...hah! And I loved how you brought literature and the original "eve" into the story (not sure if many accept that character, but I know of it) and everything else. Oh, how I would have loved Ron's reaction afterward to Draco and Hermione!!! Loved it!!!

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