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for If Only

by Clare1984

person nera
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love them both....please update?
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like it, tho i hope you have another chapter planned!
person Utopia
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Blooming Heck! What do you do at the office, luv?! lol!

This was lovely! Even if the smut was one sided. Can you imagine the paperwork they could file for this! 'Voluntary sexual harassment!' lol!

I'd like to see chapter two, but only if it isn't a repeat of chapter one with Draco watching. Give us another take on it, and I'll be happy.
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh you HAVE to add more chapters to this! It's WAAAAAAAAAAY to good to leave it as a one shot!

Great Stuff keep it up!
person Megan
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering...is this complete or is it going to be multi-fic? If it is complete can you possibly write a sequal?
Thanks
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh! please make a second chapter with them! i love it
person lilolme
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm.... well now I'm intrigued. I would really like to see what happens next so plz add another chapter!
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh busted!!!! oh i loved it!
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHHHH Snap! You have got to continue this!
person ichiruki
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, well, yes roll out that second chapter! I'd also like to know if he could tell just by her state of dress, or if there was something else that gave it away. I mean how often does one suspect their co-worker of naughty lunch time activities? And how bold is that to sit there and eat a sandwich like nothing was amiss, if he knew all that time LMAO!