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for Poor Man's Eugenics

by TenderQuaintWitch

schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay warm and fuzzy and Severus is alive. Beautiful little one shot, I'm a sucker for a vulnerable Severus.
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderfully written story. I know when you plan on doing a one shot the last thing you want to do is write more chapters, but I think you could really do well expanding this story a bit. Good luck with it, and I absolutely adored this little ficlet!
person goofball
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*ss* cute little oneshot :o)
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Now, to run the kids out of his study, or let them consummate their new relationship on his carpet? He had to be in that study every day; out they would go."

YES!!!!!!
giggles....that was cute
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....::-*v*v*-::....
Fin
....::-*v*v*-::....


NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *G
Lovely, enchanting, super !!!

Need MORE *G

Jocy
person Utopia
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GOATS! lol!

I was wondering if anyone saw the marriage law for what it is: eugenics. Nice to see someone is on the same track as me! lol!

I loved how he broke down before her - he needed that.

11/10! BRILLIANT