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for Dragon\'s Den

by Panchat

person GuardGeek
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very helpful, and I think it was a great idea to include it. I love this story and cannot wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!! :-) :-)
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really starting to get into this story. I hope that you will continue with it, I like where it appears to be going.
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You put a lot of thought and research into this story. And, so far it is really intriguing. I hope you update soon and often!
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this story! nice plot and please keep going on!!! i can't wait to read next chapter
person Mary
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so far. please write more and update as fast as you can.
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty much love this story!
Please continue to update!
person Velvet
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is such an interesting idea. It was a little weird for Draco to be calling Hermione a mudblood in one sentence and then telling his parents that he wants her in the next but everything else fell neatly into place. I can't wait till your next chapter gets posted. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Came back with more very very soon.
person Anon
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, please continue!
person melferd
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um, sweetie, you really need a grammar and spell check. I don't think the story could continue after Hermione "executed" herself. Killing oneself in the second chapter makes for very short stories. You have very interesting and different ideas, and your story is a delightful read. Please don't let lack of spell check bring it down!