schedule
March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice story line, cant wait for an update
schedule
March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your story but two things are driving me crazy:
threw = I threw the ball (past tense of throw)
through = The ball went through the window (to pass by)
your = That is your book (shows possession of an object)
you're = I am happy to see you're posting (replaces and shortens you are)
I hope this helps a little :)
threw = I threw the ball (past tense of throw)
through = The ball went through the window (to pass by)
your = That is your book (shows possession of an object)
you're = I am happy to see you're posting (replaces and shortens you are)
I hope this helps a little :)
schedule
March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon.
schedule
March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
keep updating!!! ahh i'm addicted to you!
schedule
February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very neat... can't wait for the update
schedule
February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
how can you leave me hangin? Please update soon
schedule
February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh. This could be not so much with the good. I guess you'll just have to update again so I'll know huh? lol Great update! I can't wait for more!
schedule
February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the name is Zabini..
schedule
February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic
uve got so many ideas and thought of every detail, its like watching jk rowling write her first book
uve got to update soon!!!!! gotta know whatll happen to all of em!!!
amazing
update asap!!!
luv it!
uve got so many ideas and thought of every detail, its like watching jk rowling write her first book
uve got to update soon!!!!! gotta know whatll happen to all of em!!!
amazing
update asap!!!
luv it!
schedule
February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kwel your here now we get to see smut, yeah!!!!