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for Dragon\'s Den

by Panchat

person Anon
schedule July 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
More please!!!!
person jreel08
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far. Can't wait for the next update.
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update pleaseeee!!!!!
person Tootsie
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent+Amazing. Pls continue to the end and waiting update. Cheer!
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well all I can say is that your story is completely amazing. I love your Lucius, you've put
your own stamp on all the characters. Look forward to reading more. Best wishes.
person kitryder
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope u can keep draco in his original charachter,i dont want to reAd fluffy draco.
person Anon
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your spelling sucks
i suggest a beta to fix the errors cos they ruin the story.
some examples

you use their instead of they're (as in they are)
threw, this would be used to say 'i threw a ball', you should say 'they went through the fire'


the story line is great though
person Baby Malfoy
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! this is an AMAZIN idea for a story n i cnt wait to read more!!!!! i never wld have thought myself to use dragons this way but im rly glad that u did. I def hope u update soon n im rly lookin forward to it
person Anon
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I SWEAR I've read this somewhere before. This smells fishy.
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy and here comes drama please continue i need to what will happen to Draco and Hermione. and not to mention Ginny.