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by Lomonaaeren

person bthatcher2002
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story.i hope draco does not give into harry for awhile.i hate when he just falls in bed with harry.harry really his a piece of work here.he not once thought about the debt he owed to draco's mom in five years and now he care's.good story tho,i am looking forward to the next chapter.i really like this draco.
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5!! What will Draco do now?
person MewMew2
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how you portray Harry as not only a tragic hero but as a needy human being with flaws that control his actions after his age of 'greatness.' Excellent job on characterization. I look forward to whatever else you may bring to the table with this fic. Well done.
person Yume111
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Developping nicely.
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schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 4!!!
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It hurts me to see Draco so downtrodden....him AND his family. I really do feel for them and I am glad that Harry is starting to unerstand just what he will be able to do for them...and startig to act unselfishly. Now....about Pansy...what DOES she really want?! She is just playig with them....like a puppeteer and her strings...makes me angry. Thanks for the update!
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter...poor Draco. He is so hurt and broken. He was so mean to Harry but Harry is sort of using them...he pretty much says so. Please update more!
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter I love how draco put Harry in his place. Don't make me your project,toy or pet. If there something wrong in your life get it fix. When you grow up out of this rut then I will talk to you. Love it

Thank you so much for sharing.

lisa
person Jan
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, please update chapter 3 soon.

Jan
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay a new story i like it though i don't like perkons never did >.>

whoot!