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by Lomonaaeren

person Dezra
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That chapter felt like it was a long time coming AND that it came out of nowhere. Pansy crumbled like a house of cards in the wind. I thought that she would have ended up being able to fight more. Not that I'm complaining. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens between Harry and Draco. This is another great story. Well done.
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT CHAPTER!!!! I cant wait to see how it continues
person Jude
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! IS the next on the last one?
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And now the ball is in Draco's court. What will he do? Will Pansy go after him? What will Harry do with all the information he learned about the other aurors? Sooo need chapter 8!!!
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the fact you had Harry tell Nacicissa about the true fact of life. TRUE FRIENDS won't turn your back on you no matter what. This made me call a friend who made some bad decsions and I pick him up each time. This last time I say I won't. But that not right. So Here i go again.

peace
lisa
person kittycat30
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh what a cliffie... at least I think it is! I hope Draco figures things out sooner than later!
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh those two! Gotta have chapter 7!!!
person Roozette
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I love this!!!

You took our silly Boy Wonder from being a cocky little ass back to the justifications he SHOULD still be using in his decision making process! Good for you :)

Love this story, LOVE the interraction between H/D, love your Pansy, just... well, just love you :) This story is precious. Thanks so much for writing it!

Kisses!
Roo
person beautifullove348
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I love it! The story is just flowing so smoothly; the way you are making Harry grow more attracted to Draco, and the way that you are portraying Draco liking Harry out of more than greatfullness. It's just perfect!

I love all your stories, they are all so well written and exciting. I definitely can proclaim you as the best Harry Potter fanfiction writer EVER!

Please, please update soon!
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Point for Harry! I dont care what Draco says if Harry can help them Draco is sooooo sleeping with Harry! Good chapter.