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for Flying Fun

by slashpervert

person maryjane
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and the sequel too, for that matter. There's just one issue. I assume that the italics are Wood's thoughts, but it keeps switching from first person to third and back again. Is that on purpose? Other than that the story is perfect. I WOULD have had a problem that it wasn't continued but there IS a sequel so all is well. =D