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schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 33! They seem sooo happy together! I hope it lasts!
person ametomoe
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a really neat chapter! the thing with the patronuses was totally original, though i'm not even going to wonder how a dragon and a lion go about having sex with eachother lol! there was one thing i was disapointed about, though - since harry's patronus reacted the same way he did during the... well, you know... why didn't draco's lion roar when draco screamed? lol i was sitting there like, oh! the lion's going to roar! i called it! and then it didn't happen :( ... ;) please update soon again!
person Eva
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I still love this story, but I was more a fan of the previous binding. When Harry had more power over Draco.
Don't get me wrong. It is nice how they love each other and raise a family. But the previous and more powerful binding was like the salt to it.

Eva
person QueenB
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 31 Short but sweet chapter. The addition of Valen yelling and squirming during the ceremony is a nice touch, showing that babies can't be expected to behave as adults wish. Harry should have done something NASTY to that camera when the reporter intruded on his baby like that. Boy, paparazzi can be crass, can't they?
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so good!
person QueenB
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 30 Good golly! That was truly spectacular and the doubled sensations of both men, magic and another couple (so to speak) was beyond anything that I'd expected. Just when I think you've hit the heights when it comes to written erotica, you exceed expectations. Kudos!! :D
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad things are going better for the boys. You are a great writer. Your stories really pull at a readers emotions. As I have read this story, I have cried9more then once), been mad, happy, and would like to beat the crap out of Pansy and Nott. I do so hope we will get to see them punished....in a painful and possibly public manner. I'm surprised Hermione hasn't already done something. Thanks for such a great story. Keep it coming. I check several times a day to see if you have updated.
person alle
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohh that last one is so cute! id like to see how the press reacts to them back together again though, i hope it will be really funny =). im so excited to *meet* the baby girl! i hope it will be another quick pregnancy. thank you for updating regularly! i relaly love this story! ~alle
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love how sweet they are with each other, and Valen is adorable! I love the fluff in this chapter, and the sex was HOT!
person QueenB
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 29 You know, when you get pregnant, you really start putting on the pounds. My sister has had six kids and she has ballooned up to an incredible weight. She is one of the heftiest women around--she looks even bigger than my mom did! Harry might want to take that in mind before he resumes pumping out the young 'uns.