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schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg that was a beautiful ending to that part.
person kalaway
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww, yay. Loved it. What more can I say. Gorgeous and hot and lovely. I like the name April--I thought you'd pick something strange, but it's nice and normal and pretty.
Always look forward to your up and coming stories (LOL, wow, I didn't recognize that pun until I read it back! *snort* I bet that's been used many times before and I've missed it though. Sounds like something Jack on Will&Grace would use, lol--I digress). Looking forward to Eros' Child--I always appreciate how consistent you are with updating! It's refreshing and really builds the anticipation. Kay I'll stop now.
Thanks so much for the story! :)
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH how beautiful! I sooo need chapter 43! Even though it means the end!
person QueenB
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 42 Ooh, it's so... (sniffs). A new baby in the house is such a joy, especially a little girl. I'm glad Valen is so accepting of his little sister. He's going to be such a protector for her. I hope he'll be her fierce little protector as they grow older. Thanks for giving us this altogether believable mpreg.
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww...that was beyond precious! I love how Valen knew his little sister right away. I can tell they will be close.
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was ADORABLE!!! I love Valen's reactions. He's soooo cute! I really like how Harry reacted to Valen on the broom.
person QueenB
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 41 Harry is so sweet when he's nesting. That scene with the little lace dress was just too cute. :P I'm sure little April will be a sweet darling...with a dose of mischief. All three boys are going to have to keep their eyes on her.
person alle
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHH i love this sotry. i check EVERY day for updates! april wasnt really the type of name that i was expecting, but i love love love the middle name. its perfect for their family. i like the reporter, and how loyal he is to their privacy and how he respects it. i cant wait to see how spoiled april is!! GREAT STORY!! -alle
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!! I sooo need chapter 42!!!
person Graballz
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*laughing hysterically* WHO CALLED IT????? I DID!!!!! I gotta tell you...as soon as I read the line about "Draco licking his ice cream cone", I was like "Ice cream sex. It's gonna happen."

Not two lines later, Harry got distracted!!!!!!! MWA-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

And just because it wasn't described...doesn't mean it didn't happen....c'mon, we ALL know it did!!! I'm just really amused that I "called" it! (Not that it was that hard, but still...)

And the photos were really cute! "Valen might get stepped on"...Well, the kid's got to learn how to play with others eventually...and that he's NOT the center of the universe...OH GOD! Harry and Draco are going to be "those" parents, aren't they??? The ones who can't let go...and if another kid so much as LOOKS at Valen wrong, they're going to be all like, "He can't do that!" blah blah blah

*sigh* Remind me to slap some sense into Harry and Draco when that happens...RELAX, GUYS! It happens! Valen will be fine WITHOUT your intervention! (actually, he'll be BETTER without their intervention...they'll cripple him if they intervene/continue to intervene)

Okay, sorry *rant over* anyway, good chapter! Liked the ice cream bit!