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schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was such a sweet ending to the chapter. I am glad our boys are back in something close to their usual behavior. That's a HUGE relief. I could never imagine the two of them not being together. That would be devastating, as Harry's earlier reaction proved. That was enough to break my heart, but I'm glad they seem on track again.
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He didn't tell Harry about Pansy trying to help him with his "problem" .
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 18!
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was absolutely thrilled when I saw there was another book in this series. Some chapters were harrowing to read, but I love this one for that. I guess even paradise isn't perfect. I've read them all several times. This is really beautifully done. I can't wait for more!
person QueenB
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. Awww, that was so cute, the two Patronuses (Patroni? Patrone?) cuddling up together. Valen's first word was startling, too. The whole class can say they were there when Valen said "Kitty!"
person kalaway
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter name matches the chapter, absolutely brilliant. I was totally squeeing at the end, aww! too adorable and hot and beautiful, lol! *makes embarrassing squealing noises*
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 17!!! Almost feel sorry for Theo!!! Almost!
person redheadwizard
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chp. 17
1. hotness
2. the whole patronus thing was awesome... the lion and dragon... how adorable!
3. i swear to god if theo follows draco out of the room... i will cry!
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 16!!!
person QueenB
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 15 Hey, maybe they can ask Theodore Nott to be a witness. That Slytherin would get the message, loud and clear, that Draco is off limits. Then Nott wouldn't let himself get carried away in future by a momentarily spell-influenced Draco to have naughty sex with him in a closet.