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I can't wait to find out how they handle Pansy! Great chapter! Very hot.

Ch. 20 I always thought sex against a wall was problematic. You make it work but it never seems a comfortable or an easy position to sustain for long. I'm eager to learn what revenge they take on Pansy. It should be humiliating, disagreeable, long lasting and something the entire Slytherin House can appreciate. They don't need to expose her to public ridicule, if they prefer. But since she had no compunctions in that area, they shouldn't necessarily spare her embarrassment in front of the entire school.

Sooo need chapter 21!!! Seemed to ease the hurt a little more. But did it fix any of the problems they keep shoving to the side?

Ch. 19 Pansy just keeps pushing it, doesn't she? Okay, I don't care how forgiving Draco is. He needs to slap down that bitca, otherwise she's just not going to get the message. Grrrr...

Sooo need chapter 20!! They both should have known better. Especially with Pansy in the mix. She'll do anything to hurt them. Especially Harry.

Can they punish Pansy now? Please?

Ch. 18 It's refreshing to take time to bring in the outside world and its concerns (although the insular environment of Hogwarts may not qualify as the "outside" world) into Harry and Draco's relationship. It reminds the reader that the two men (and a baby) don't operate in a vacuum. They affect people around them and other people affect them.

I'm surprised that Draco decided to let Pansy alone. Then again, petty revenge would have been the resort of a younger, immature Draco. He understands why she and Theo reacted the way they did to his seemingly sudden infatuation with Harry and Hermione did a wonderful job of adding her viewpoint. I suppose this is where a more cerebral intellect comes in handy. Great chapter.

I loved that chapter. I'm glad Harry seems more secure now.

Sounds wonderful! Can't wait for chapter 19!!

Thanks for the update! I love me some good reading material before bed...and in the morning...and after school...and after work...you get the point.