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Ch. 22 This is truly horrific! I didn't expect this at all. This will be sheer torture for the poor boys, like the Spanish Inquisition. (And no one expects the Spanish Inquisition.)

Sorry. Monty Python fan. :P

Seriously, I'd like to see how they're going to get out of this mess. But they have Hermione helping them and she's always been a wonderful asset, both as a friend and researcher. I'm hoping to see this resolved quickly. But I have a feeling this is going to take more than a couple of chapters to sort out, isn't it?

I'm just now reading this at #12/22 and I have to say that Harry & Draco's marriage
has definitely walked into some serious trials & tribulations...and the war is
freakin' over with.

I actually felt for Harry as he tried to get Draco off that Love Potion, by doing
what HE thought was right & felt for Draco who, in reality, truly didn't have a
choice.

Man, with friends Draco has who NEEDS enemies.

Ch. 21 Ron and Hermione have to witness Harry and Draco...having sex? Gulp! That's an unusual strain to put on any friendship. But I'm sure an intelligent, reasonable person like Hermione can weather it. Ron might have a bit of difficulty at first; hopefully she'll talk him out of it.

I'm sure the problem with the Howlers will die down. I'm just worried that Pansy is giong to be an active problem in the future instead of a one-time nuisance. They really will have to deal with her at some point. I'm wondering what Draco will do to her.

OMG! OMG! OMG!

I am all teary eye here. What the heck went wrong, even I can't seem to figure that out or venture a guess. Oh this is horrible. Is little Valen going to know something is not right? How long will they have to suffer the loss between the 2 of them? True this could certainly bring them closer together as each attempt to cope with the current situation. Hmmm, since you mentioned Pansy and Theo-would they continue to be apart of their life now? Could Theo redeem himself somehow? OMG! What if Pansy finds out the situation between Draco and Harry? *eeepps* Why oh Why did they have to go and mess with something that wasn't half bad. Yeah Yeah I know, and you know Draco had a gut feeling about this all along....

I just love reading your epics.

*anxiously waits for the next chapter*

Just when I thought things were going to get better!

grr I knew it! I know they have to fix the binding but grrr hasn't Harry learned to trust Draco's instincts yet?? You better fix this fast! Siriusly, I don't think I can take more than 2 chapters of agony. Will Valen still react the same?? please don't drag it out *sob*

Sooo need chapter 22! I'm sooo worried for them! Sooo much could and can go wrong!

When Harry and Draco left the Room of Requirement,after Pansy's crap, I figured she would get punished. Harry and Draco left the room, but, wasn't Ron and Hermione still in there? I figured they would have done something.

Hey!! I don't have a chance to review after every chapter, but I hope you know that I've been following the BP series and try to read it as often as I can! This one is great, just like always!

I LOVE Valen!!! I was a little like "WTF" on the name at first, but it's really grown on me! Good job with that!

And as far as the whole Pansy/Theo/Draco fiasco...some bitches need to die. Seriously. Pansy tops the list, and it should be painful and horrific. Possibly Theo but only because he was stupid enough to *actually* think that Harry Potter's husband would be interested in HIM, the little peon! Gah, stupid people piss me off, and Theo definitely qualifies!!!

And whoever leaked to the newspaper...(Pansy?) BEWARE!!! (and DIE BITCH DIE) lol Sorry, just venting. But I also do have a lot of animosity towards Pansy, so I hope that she will be put out of her misery before too long. What she did was unforgivable and Harry's right not to trust her.

I absolutely LOVED the interaction between Harry and Draco after the whole Theo thing...SO much angst, but it really made their relationship seem more real to me and not just "perfect, lovey-dovey, let's fuck like little gay bunnies all the time"...don't get me wrong, I'm SOOOOOOOOO glad that they're working it out to both of their likings, but just really well done on the angst and capturing the torturous emotions.

I'm a little skeptical about the bindings and them being removed...but I trust you guys, so however it happens is fine with me...as long as Harry and Draco are okay in the end!!! (and hopefully Valen too...he's not going to get hurt/killed/kidnapped, is he? *whimper*)

Can't wait for more!

hmm...making me a bit nervous, too many possibilities for problems.