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about #24...

there's nothing much to say except I'm REALLY starting to feel sorry for
them and hope they have a solution soon.

*sob* Can't Draco take a really extreme numbing potion and Harry just do it?! For gods sake he fucked him when he was bloody dead before not to mention choking and burning and livid and a hundred other things! Come on! Draco can create a polarity potion or something! GAH! I seriously cried a bit at this chapter, but we're getting nowhere! *has a tantrum with Draco!*

Nooooo!!! I can't believe what happened! I'm aching for the two of them. I really hope that there is a way to fix their binding.

They had sex to fix the potion at school, when one of them was dead and dying, etc, Sex fixed all that, fix this one.

Ch. 24 Unlike other reviewers, I don't believe that mere sex can fix this and the idea of screwing Draco while he's howling in agony is deeply disgusting. It's too much like rape and neither of them would figure himself for it.

They need to exercise self-control. It's only been a week and both of them have gone without sex before much longer than that. They should watch each other masturbate, talk dirty to each other, perhaps watch some of those moving pictures in books. Maybe they can use dildoes on each other or jerk off on one another... Heck, there are all sorts of naughty things they could do that doesn't require actual touching. Use your imagination, people! ;P

crap man and i thought the fight with voldemort was worst but this this is just freaking torture i just want to cry on their behalf and take away the pain its too much and draco im afraid for him not just becuz im afraid of wat he may do but becuz if they dnt find a way to reverse it harry will lose the only thing preciious to him besides valen and his friends. i have read the whole sagas and must i luv u. u r freaking amazing and i think ppl will agree that ur version of ending voldemort's reign is in my opinion better than the last book. great job and keep them coming ^^

Ch. 23 This was such a bittersweet chapter. The men's longing for each other and their inability to get close was exquisitely laid out; you could feel their misery oozing off the page. Valen's triumph over Sredni was a little oasis of joy and well balanced with what else was happening in this chapter.

It's sad that Harry's magic hurts Draco like that. Maybe a little more distance might help. Dirty talk can be incredibly arousing; they should get cell phones although the bills would be astronomical.

"Our bills are outrageous! Who've you been talking to?"

"You. Who've you been talking to?"

"You!"

(sighs)

Ch. 23 (addendum) I wonder how Draco could get a splinter in his LEFT hand? That's the silver one, isn't it? Guess it really is just like flesh.

Well, at least this gives me a visual as to which side of the bed he sleeps on. Heh.

about #22 & #23...

'oh, what a tangled web..' that THEY have weaved! Man, that sucks! I feel COMPLETELY
sorry for them. If it ain't one thang, it's another when it comes to them, I just
can't imagine not being able to touch someone when you've been doing it for sooo
long!

*sigh* can't wait to read how they get out of this one.

I think the boys have been put through enough all ready,to much really.