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person ametomoe
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
when i was reading the chapters about draco and harry not being able to touch, i felt extremely sad and even cried a little bit, and when i finished chapter 28 i literally cheered! i'm so extremely excited for this story to continue, because your writing has amazed me through all of the five previous books and the beginning of this one! lol, let it be known that i'm a huge fan. your spelling and grammar are perfect and the sentences you form and versatile and unique as well. major kudos - i'll be waiting for more! :)
person QueenB
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 28 Dang. It seems a shame that Harry is the one always to have the babies. Screw the Manor; can't they use magic to get Draco up the spout for ONCE?! That being stated, loved the happy reconciliation sex. They're certainly making up for lost time, aren't they? \;D
person alle
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!! another baby! at first i wasnt even too sure about the first one -valen- but now i cant imagine ANY story without him. and a GIRL to!! oh my god! no way-- i can't wait to see what a lovely name they will pick for her! I'm so glad they can be close again too, i nearly died with they couldn't even touch each other. PLEASE update soon... im jumping out of my skin for the next chapter! ~alle
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww...a little girl! Yay! Very sweet and hot chapter.
person kalaway
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
huge deep breath
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Great story so far. Definitely worth the wait.
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH, THANK GOD! I actually have tears in my eyes now. I am beyond relieved that they can touch each other again. I am happy now.I was beginning to be really concerned, especially for Draco. That was such a great chapter!
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hellz yeaaaaa they back together again and i couldnt be any more happier whooooohooooo keep those chapters coming ^^
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!!!!!
person QueenB
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 27 Oh, that was terrific! I was terrified that Harry might kill Draco accidentally but he managed to overcome and get bonded to his husband again, just as he'd promised. The subsequent scene where he screwed Draco again on the bedroom floor was delicious and smutty and lewd and erotic, too. My my. (I need a cold shower.) :P~~~~

Splinter in the butt. Ouch! He could try tweezing it out, though. Touching Draco while he's removing it sounds like so much more fun. ;D