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for Eclipsed Moon

by BleedingStarGoddess

schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a good beginning tho. has me interested and it was pretty short. that's rare.
person Charlie
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry waking up to a nightmare.
I love it.
person Narius
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. What really struck me was the line, "Such thin shoulders you have," as if Harry's shoulders had been worn down by shouldering expectations, the burden of the prophesy and Voldemort's resurrection. That the only one to find him would be Fenrir Greyback is almost pathetic though, and already speaks loads of his current relationship with the other Light side members. Will you delve into Harry's relationship with the others or will it be solely focusing on Fenrir and Harry's relationship?

I also like how intuitive and protective(?) Fenrir is toward Harry. It's just so perfectly done.

I can't wait to read more. XOXO.
person Amiyom
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looks like it will be good! Intriguing start!
person curly88
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that another story of this pairing is posted. Please continue I am interested on where this will go.
person alma
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very good start.
person qwerty
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you should focus on this story... I love Fenrir/Harry fics!
update
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great start, I look forward to seeing what's going to happen next.
person Flamesky
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wooooooooooooooow-----Suicidal!Harry watched by an actual caring!Fenrir? *dreamy sigh* Sorta of an out of pity turning u into a werewolf thing--but still cool, I can see how that may cause friction between the two and i do terribly like it when they fight the on-coming attraction between them....But I do love my fluff dont get me wrong! Interesting start really, I'd be curious to read more...Understand more....Is it going to be a total AU or not...and why was Harry really so unhappy to kill himself? Why was Fenrir really there......? Lol! And the ust, can almost taste it im giddy lol! Deff deff cant wait for a next chapter!

....Oh and give it a go with other stories if u want. Like, personally i find it easier to focus on one idea at a time----but do write the basic line/plot/idea of it so u wont forget it! Nice start!
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Update soon!