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YES...another chapter...HOORAY.
And very well done too.
I'm really loving this tale.
I'm addicted and would like some more.
...please.

*blushes* ur welcome! Loved the fever!Harry!prospective it really mounted up the tension and angst for me----and pokes Fenrir with his stupid whisper that had to make me stupidly shiver...*shivers* *g* Lol, so its starting, Harry's change...curious to see more! Update update! Yuuuuppyyy!

Excellent chapter! I loved the end how you made Harry's look. Brilliant...now what will Voldemort do when he finds out anout Harry? Can Fenrir keep him safe?

*shudders* This was amazing, honestly. I love the broken thoughts, broken senses. When you're dying (I imagine) or in extreme pain (I know this for a fact), this is exactly what it's like. Senses are off, but enhanced at the same time. THoughts are jumbled, garbled, misleading, scary. Anything that sounds, looks, feels, seems comforting is something you will grab onto. I love the way you wrote this. I wish I could shake your hand or hug you or something. It's amazing! And I loved the fight between the other Alpha and Fenrir. Hunger caused the Alpha to do things it normally wouldn't, and Fenrir didn't kill him because of this. And because he needed to get Harry back to the pack. Killing the Alpha would take time. I liked it though. Still unsure as to whether Fenrir is wolf or human in these last two chapters; it's really confusing. Loved everything else though. GREAT fic, GREAT chapter. ~dpa06~

This is really good so far. I can't wait for the next chapter!!

AWESOME!!! totally kick ass! this sounds like a vampire LV/HP that i read though. oh well! i like fenrir better! ^u^

Very cool for a start. You gave us a feel for Harry's situation. Fenrir watching him was the kicker. I hope you have more, cause it really is a good start

i just added this story to my favorites list!

Very interesting. I love the broken Harry, and Fenrir sitting there watching him. I'm assuming it's Fenrir. It's a werewolf and Harry mentioned the Death Eaters. But you also said it was the full moon. Is Fenrir a werewolf right now? And how does he have him mental capabilities if he is? It's a great start. It seemed at the end that when Fenrir infected him, that Harry was very pissed off. I can understand why. He wanted die, not get turned into a werewolf. And from your summary, they'll be having a fight real soon. It's great, and I can't wait to read more. -dpa06-

Oh now this sounds so good! I cant wait for more! I simply have become hooked n Harry/Fenrir but there are so few out there that I really like! You already got me hooked on this one!