rate_review Reviews

Wow! A most wonderful story! And English isn't your first language?! I'm very impressed! There was a need for such a story... Maybe less people will call us (who 'beat each other up' lol) freaks now ;o) Just so you know, the most occurring mistakes are of-off ones, and then-than... If you'd like some help you could e-mail me... Always willing to help people who are interested and thankful! Keep up the excellent work!

I just want to say that was the first one i have read that is the most realistic. And to answer your question yes you can have a heavier play but no you dont have to come out bruised or bloodied from it take it from some one who is in fact part of the BDSM world I have playhed heavier and had heavier play done to me and not been bruised or bloodied. but so far this is my fav BDSM fic over all well actually you tie with another one called How Severus spends his summer hols but i love it none the less. thank you for haveing understood the truth about BDSM.

great story enjoyed reading it.

Nice intro into play plus a Rocky Horror reference- I stick a gold star on your preferred part.

*Sigh* Ok, since I'm getting hung up to dry and criticized, I should explain myself. I didn't mean to get into abuse... But you spent all that time building up to something. You wrote how Harry liked pain and got all hot and bothered about his fantasy of being spanked. Then your big climax is him being handcuffed and being sort of tickled with that flogger thing.. (can't remember the names of stuff at the moment). It just seemed anticlimactic to me. I was disappointed that you stopped there and didn't go further into the relationship. You advertise BDSM but there really wasn't much of it. The fantasies were more involved.

And no, I'm not saying I expected the stereotypical stuff. I didn't say it before, but part of why I liked it was not the stereotypical. I've dabbled in the lifestyle myself. I thought I was into tame stuff...

That's all I meant. It just seems very short and cut off to spend all that time building up and then just ending at such a light point. It wasn't a request or an order or anything... It was a suggestion and honest opinion.

this was very very good story
please keep writing and post
bye bye

Hi!
Would you care to translate "Another Kind of Magic" and publish it at fanfiction.de ? I really loved your story, it's written quite sensitive. :)
Cheers,
Heidi

*grin* Very instructive. I like it!

Thats a great story. Really funny and sweet at the same time. I really enjoyed reading it.

wonderful! very smexy!