rate_review Reviews

thank you for writing a very believably normal BDSM fic! it's nice to see some respect and dignity instead of violence and reluctance.

I have one word "YUM!' loved this. my first real BDSM and very education to top ;) Started this over at fanfic, but had to continue on.

I have one word "YUM!' loved this. my first real BDSM and very education to top ;) Started this over at fanfic, but had to continue on.

Very sexy;)I can see both of them in that type of relationship,and I love that its not all"oh,I've been in love with you since 1st yr,lets fuck now!"(I've read stories like that:p)
and you have great English!

Well done.
Nice to see more of the mental side of BDSM
=^-^=

Just discovered your story and was very pleased to read as I agree that the stories I read sound more like abuse. This was very interesting. Thanks for writing.

It was great! Thanks to much for sharing your story with us.

I just found your story and haven't read it all yet, but I saw the comment you made at the beginning of this chapter to a reader and just had to say that I love the story so far! You are doing a wonderful job both in your writing of the characters, their thoughts, lives, what is going on at Hogwarts, and your description of the possibilities of BDSM. It doesn't have to be degrading or violent, so whoever that reader was, get over it and read something else if you must.

Anyway, I am going to finish the rest of the chapters and look forward to more, but I just had to say that I think you are writing a wonderful story that looks way beyond just this subject. :-)

Wow I am so glad I found this again. I love the sensuality of this story even before the sex scenes began. The interactions between Harry and Severus had a certain spark of sensuality about it

Thank you. Very nicely done. BTW, I could tell that English was not your native language. You should consider an English speaking Beta.