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for The Thought Of It All

by WritingInTheDarkness

person Camryn31
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaah at laaast
i jus found this story today and i loved it
but i kept waiting for signs that they fell in love or sthn
yaaaay *applauds*
so... what now? is she goin bad or is he goin good??
updaaate
xx
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
stop your screaming. my ears hurt, i like the chap!
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hermione... continuing to date Ron.... O_O !! We simply can not allow this to happen!!


Keep up the good work with the story. ^^ I look forward to the next update.
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes!!!!
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wait... today is may the 27th!! Oh the joy!
person AeraVale
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!!

Ok, it's a really good story but I do have one criticism I'm afraid! I'm a stickler for grammar and I noticed a couple of times that you used 'there' instead of 'their'. I suggest you look up the differences between the meanings...

Very cool idea though... I like the way you keep both Malfoy and Hermione in character, it's an interesting play on the 6th book.

Aera
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what happened to the other six chaps? i miss them!
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so much fun to read. Hermione and Draco make a great couple. ^^ I can't wait for them to finally get together. hehe
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thats right Hermione! You gets some revenge loving from your convientently located Malfoy boy toy! That'll show Ron who's wrong! >:) hehehe
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uh oh. update again soon!