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it's an intresting start. It deff. has potenital, hopefully you can update soon. I would really like to see how things unfold. Maybe you can even write longer chaps?

post soon =D

you might want to check your spelling and punctuation. suite not sweet and concentration not consintration.. these are just a few that i found in the first chapter. I suggest a beta.

I like it. Please update soon.

I like the plot idea. We have seen a lot of younger Severus done in several ways, this feels more original.
For someone that does not type well, you only have a few errors. I think that spell check would have caught a few of them too.
I think that it may be a stretch for the golden trio to not recognize Snape. Remember, Harry saw him when he was taking occulmency lessons, and I really feel that Hermione is too bright to not make the connection, especially with the name that he has been given.
However, this is your story and your imagination at work, so keep going so we can see what will happen.

I don't understand why Hermione wouldn't recognize Sev once she saw him. Even if he is younger he would still look somewhat the same.

pretty god, but confusing, so Snape just disaapered?? and how will the war change?? anyhow GOOD PLOT

pretty god, but confusing, so Snape just disaapered?? and how will the war change?? anyhow GOOD PLOT

pretty god, but confusing, so Snape just disaapered?? and how will the war change?? anyhow GOOD PLOT

pretty god, but confusing, so Snape just disaapered?? and how will the war change?? anyhow GOOD PLOT