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Let me be honest with you:
This is, without question, the best story I have ever read!!! I don't say things like that often, but it is PERFECT. I can think of no weak point, no flaws... You're style is far better than J. K. Rowlings and you're story is like the 8th book, that never existed but I have always wanted to read. You think of everything in your plot... your whole sotryline is complete with nothing that doesn't really fit together... You really write beautifully and - to my amazement - it isn't even that OOC, which I think is always the most diffidult part in Draco/Hermione stories.
I have to say, I've never read a Dark!Harry fic before... And at first I was a bit suspicious... but, like everything else, it fits totally in the story. Why wouldn't he get mad after everything he went through??!
The fic really is darc at some points, but the little scenes you write about Draco and Hermione, not even the "making love"-part... but the picture you describe...like them, sitting on a bench near the window... them, hugging... it really makes my heart ache (I know it sounds corny, but it does... I want a Draco too!! ;) )
So, i think i wrote everything i wanted to say. Sorry I didn't review earlier, but I just found your fic 2 days ago and I was very eager to finish reading all the chapters there are...
I really hope you update soon, because this will be my priority, first thing to check on every morning (Pathetic, I know...)
I don't know what else to say.... Wonderful!!!
Cam xx

Hi! First let me say that I normally don't favor the darker fics, but the summary for this one intrigued me for some reason. I was not disappointed. I have read the story through so far and I have to say I can't wait for the next chapter! You have done an excellent job with the plot and the depth of the characters. Having Karen as a beta doesn't hurt either. She's a godsend! I should know since she is also my beta for my fic. Hope to see a new post up soon!!! I'll be waiting on baited breath....

Woot great chapter.
So now, hopefully, Hermione will finally go back to the past and ..kill harry potter finally?
Though meeting Snape in the past would be very interesting.

Oh god, the cat sleeping on Lucius's lap....hahahaha

Damn, after reading chapter 17.....
When is the next update? :)
you keep me wanting for morre

I have many a favorite story throughout the Draco/Hermione fan fiction, and then I began to read yours. I was transfixed. I have read it since about the third chapter, and each time I come on to see if anyone has updated anything I like or anything new I am always beyond disappointed when I don't see The Fool, the Emperor, and the Hanged Man in the running.
I think your writing style is beautiful, you definitely have a remarkable way with words.

I love how you haven't rushed hem into being anything. I love how back and forth they are. How one moment he's romantic and chivalrous and the next his back to being the prat Draco Malfoy we all know and love.

I really hope you don't take this long to update again. I would love to know more of the Beltane traditions.

Isn't Beltane the name of the centaur Narcissa mentioned was living within the forest of Malfoy Manor?

ok, so i just finished reading this story from beginning to end (it took me a total of 3 days... school has the annoying habit of getting in the way of one's reading time) and all i have to say is this story is AMAZING!!!!

i literally could NOT stop reading, you have such a talented writing technique. i was kinda missing draco's presence in the last chapter, but the relationship between the two of them so cute and laced with tender moments of affection and unresolved sexual tension... LOVE IT!!!

i love everything about this story and will be inconsolable if you do not update soon!!


this might sound weird, but thank you so much for writing this! i needed something happy in my life right now...

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

That was the best waste of two hours of my life! So much for studying. haha

I found your portrayal of Draco and Hermione very in character and yet at the same time more mature. This plot is completely original and intriging!

As I was reading I thought of Nietzsche "Anyone who fights with monsters should take care that he does not in the process become a monster. And if you gaze for long into an abyss, the abyss gazes back into you." Harry is become what he is seeking to destroy.

This story is absolutely brilliant! Keep up the good work!

Oh my..! This is one of the best fanfics I've been lucky enough to find and that last chapter was a doozie! Thank you so much for writhing but i have a feeling you aren't getting as much attention as you deserve. Your Dark!Harry is an amazing villain. It's because we know he's so strong but we also can sense the unfamiliar insanity within him... I also hope that Hermio--Jane will grow her hair back soon.

more, more, MORE!
please :)