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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your best work so far! Love it!
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok i know this sounds weird, but i'm sort of sad draco has two eyes now instead of one. lol let me explain. i was getting used to sexy one eyed draco, even starting to like it. My dear, you are fabulous. i love this story, i look forward to ur updates. the way you twisted so draco did all those things int he past, affecting Hermione's future. love the cabin idea also! please dont make me wait long
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seems that the story is coming to an end. look forward to knowing the message left in the book.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you already know what I'm going to say. so why sound like a broken record right?
I do however have something else to say.
I am surprised at the hatred sent towards Albus. Both by Hermione and Narcissa, and the clear dislike everyone else seems to have for him. I'm hoping it'll be explained a bit more. I understand the anger about Harry....but it's such hatred, and no forgiveness. It's harsh and I'm confused a bit.
Update soon, I love it. (I risked sound like a broken record anyways)
I do however have something else to say.
I am surprised at the hatred sent towards Albus. Both by Hermione and Narcissa, and the clear dislike everyone else seems to have for him. I'm hoping it'll be explained a bit more. I understand the anger about Harry....but it's such hatred, and no forgiveness. It's harsh and I'm confused a bit.
Update soon, I love it. (I risked sound like a broken record anyways)
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if my poor heart can stand any more exitement from this story!!!
the "intersteller bypass" reference was a HOOT!!!!! lol.....
the "intersteller bypass" reference was a HOOT!!!!! lol.....
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCKING HELL!!! Please excuse the language but honestly Holy fucking hell!!! wow beyond wow. That was simply fabulous. I'm just so stunned. I was really blind sided by this chapter. Holy hell.
I do have a few questions I'm sure you'll answer because you always do within your chapters.
1. Why did Draco take the time-turner? Ws he searching for Hermione or trying to save himself. And is he really blind or was he just temporarily blinded by the blow to his head? I got confused by that one.
2. If Draco is actually Erebus why did he beat Hermione so effciently. Like ouch! haha. AND why didn't he stop himself from using the time turner and have his injured self wait for Hermione?
3. When's the next chapter going to be up? hehe
So I hope it'll be soon that your next update comes. As Im sure hyou've realized I'm addicted. And with all addiction a person needs the source to survive.(okay I'm NOT that bad. I won't wither away to nothing. but I will pout a hell of a whole lot)
I do have a few questions I'm sure you'll answer because you always do within your chapters.
1. Why did Draco take the time-turner? Ws he searching for Hermione or trying to save himself. And is he really blind or was he just temporarily blinded by the blow to his head? I got confused by that one.
2. If Draco is actually Erebus why did he beat Hermione so effciently. Like ouch! haha. AND why didn't he stop himself from using the time turner and have his injured self wait for Hermione?
3. When's the next chapter going to be up? hehe
So I hope it'll be soon that your next update comes. As Im sure hyou've realized I'm addicted. And with all addiction a person needs the source to survive.(okay I'm NOT that bad. I won't wither away to nothing. but I will pout a hell of a whole lot)
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
let me just say when i think i have it all figured out, you throw me for a loop. great story! I always look forward to your updates and I can't wait to see what you have planned next.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg
maybe its just too late for me... but i dont get it
this whole time - thing is sooo complicated... i dont get waht happened to draco, which draco and so on...
help :D
maybe its just too late for me... but i dont get it
this whole time - thing is sooo complicated... i dont get waht happened to draco, which draco and so on...
help :D
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like with Out of the Silent Planet, you have an amazing way of weaving very intricate stories! I don't understand how you even begin to sit down to write something like this... Doesn't it take a lot of planning for all these details? If your fics were novel length, you could give Rowling a run for her money.
I also found it great how you fleshed out Rowling's original characters through your own interpretations. It seems credible that Harry could mentally progress and change into this tragic hero. It's so much more heartbreaking to read it through Hermione's point of view, because as the reader I'm processing what Harry has become from a best friend who used to love and cherish him.
And all the while, you've managed to make a great Draco/Hermione fic. Wow, just WOW.
I also found it great how you fleshed out Rowling's original characters through your own interpretations. It seems credible that Harry could mentally progress and change into this tragic hero. It's so much more heartbreaking to read it through Hermione's point of view, because as the reader I'm processing what Harry has become from a best friend who used to love and cherish him.
And all the while, you've managed to make a great Draco/Hermione fic. Wow, just WOW.
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May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Er wow. Big run in a circle.