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I can't tell you how excellent this story is so far. Intriguing story and an excellent writing style. Update soon!

WoW!! What an amazing story this is!! Very well written and the plot....WoW!! Great ,great, plot! very interesting and not just a fluffy story!
the way Hermione is no more, and I like Jane better than I did Hermione, and Malfoy the cat! You wrote it beautifully ,the way she changed her life, and why,her "Slytherinish" relation with Slunghorn...just amazing!
I love the fact that Severus is her conscience voice,(I'm also in love with him *blushes*)!And Draco...the man Draco and the way she remembers him from the early days..it is so captivating!!
But I am intrigued...who was Lucius going to consult?? Severus??...(should i bee so lucky???) Maybe his portrait??
And who does Harry want to resurrect?? Voldemort? But why do I have the feeling that somehow Voldemort is behind all of this?!
Please update soon! don't keep us waiting to long!

Excellent, I love the mystery and suspense! And I think I'm getting the title, I think those all tarot cards, though I'm not entirely sure what they mean, I'm sure discovering what it means as it relates to the story will be fun to find out!

Kudos!

Oh, ow. Crying for real. Although a lot of it had to do with her admission that she loved Severus. Because, well, who doesn't love Severus? And isn't it right that someone should have been devastated by his death? I mean, JKR and her, "Who would want to be loved by Snape?" and I'm going, "Well, your favorite of the trio is Ron and you think the Weasleys are teh awesome. Clearly your judgment is wonky."

Yeah. And Lucius, of course. All my favorites have been considered -- hurrah!

Um, anyway. The rape/brutalization: For something so horrible, you did a really, really good job with it. Things were honest and you definitely didn't pull any punches. And she's not out of the woods, and... Mostly, I'm just impressed at how very unromantic everything is. It feels very honest and not at all contrived. So, go you.

all i can really say is "wow", and "holy hell", oh, and "more" lol. really intense stuff in this chapter! actually that maybe a huge understatement, like "Harry is only slightly crazy". Yikes, I'm on the edge of my seat here, but in a good way.

Wow! this is deep and dark and is promising to be not one of the run of the mill DM/HG stories. Can't wait for the next chap.

Hah! I didn't realize this was yours, at first! Very interesting....though my favorite pairing, as you know, is not Snermione. :D

My heart was pounding by the end of the second chapter! You've off to a great start here. I can't wait to read more.

whew, you need to get that saleswitch with the sweets trolley to visit during your story ( mayhaps with sick-bags just in case) It took a lot out of me just reading this wonderful story! loved the very realitic undertanding of why Hermione morphed into Jane....can hardly wait until the third chapter! Squick n all.

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ok after chapter 2 I'm kind of scared to see chapter 3, but I am also hooked! The mystery and suspense is really too much.