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November 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM
This story was amazing. It was intense and yet it kept drawing me back in again and again. It was funny. It was heart-warming. It was very good. My one complaint was the formating error of the punctuation marks, but the story was SO good that it was worth suffering through the formatting! Thank you!!
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January 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Another stunning piece of literature. I have read a good deal of your stories and I am glued to the screen every time. Other than the few grammatical errors that I found, because I used to be an editor and I pick up on that, the story is extremely detailed, keeps you guessing, and shocks you in the end. Nice work. I look forward to seeing more of your stories.
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November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story!!! This has an awesome plot and a lot if detail... Very great story put together.... I couldn't stop reading.... Love love love!!! Thank you for such a wonderful story and taking me into your Harry Potter world!!!
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November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just like the previous reviewer, this is simply the best Dramione I've read (and I read only Dramione). Who needs an HP8 with fanfiction like this?
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October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Best fanfiction I have ever read in my life!
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know that all's said and done here, but I only just got around to reading this fic, and I wanted to applaud you on it. Your plotting is brilliant: there were many times when I was taken completely by surprise. Your characterization is excellent and the characters progress logically and smoothly. The emotion in every sort of scene is very well done. There are some beautifully poignant moments as well as some frightening ones as well. All-in-all, an amazing fic! Thank you for a wonderful experience, and I'll be sure to remember your work!
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October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear moirasfate:
Congratulations! Your story The Fool, the Emperor, and the Hanged Man has been nominated at the Smutastic Awards for Best First Time. To proceed to the seconding phase, please email us at smutasticawards@yahoo.com by October 15th 2008, stating you give your permission for the story to run in the above stated category.
Again, congratulations, and we invite you to check out the awards community by visiting us at http://community.livejournal.com/smutastic_award/.
Sincerely,
Wildflower4evr, Smutastic Awards Moderator
Congratulations! Your story The Fool, the Emperor, and the Hanged Man has been nominated at the Smutastic Awards for Best First Time. To proceed to the seconding phase, please email us at smutasticawards@yahoo.com by October 15th 2008, stating you give your permission for the story to run in the above stated category.
Again, congratulations, and we invite you to check out the awards community by visiting us at http://community.livejournal.com/smutastic_award/.
Sincerely,
Wildflower4evr, Smutastic Awards Moderator
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have just finished reading your story, and I want to tell you that it had me caught all the way through. Very nice work!
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I should tell you that I have created an account soley to review this story - I liked it so much! I read the whole thing in two days - it would have been half a day had not real life got in the way!
I am a real fan of a powerful, independent Hermione - I don't think it is done enough. It's pretty possible she would turn out as you propose. I definatley think she would be an unspeakable. Your Draco is great too, very blokey, no rambling about feelings etc.
Brilliantly written - great to see a writer take a POV and stick to it. I hate reading every scene from both characters viewpoints - it leaves nothing to the imagination. The story is fabulous - how on earth did you come up with it?! I especially liked the twist that Malfoy got lost in time for 9 years - absence makes the heart grow fonder and all that!
The only things I didn't like were the literary references. I didn't mind the brief Jane Eyre reading it was more the repeated (well maybe twice!) comparison of Draco with some other fictional heart throb. I don't think it improved the narrative in any way. I also thought that it should have ended more promptly in a reunion between D/H after the death of Harry. I think Hermione going to the US/ Pansy/ the mask/ leaving them in peril was all a bit much. It like an extra mini story tacked on the end.
But that is not to say I didn't enjoy every word of it. I loved your Beltane scenes - the idea of the runes expressing desires was inspired. I could wax on about this story all day but suffice to say I liked it very much indeed!
I am a real fan of a powerful, independent Hermione - I don't think it is done enough. It's pretty possible she would turn out as you propose. I definatley think she would be an unspeakable. Your Draco is great too, very blokey, no rambling about feelings etc.
Brilliantly written - great to see a writer take a POV and stick to it. I hate reading every scene from both characters viewpoints - it leaves nothing to the imagination. The story is fabulous - how on earth did you come up with it?! I especially liked the twist that Malfoy got lost in time for 9 years - absence makes the heart grow fonder and all that!
The only things I didn't like were the literary references. I didn't mind the brief Jane Eyre reading it was more the repeated (well maybe twice!) comparison of Draco with some other fictional heart throb. I don't think it improved the narrative in any way. I also thought that it should have ended more promptly in a reunion between D/H after the death of Harry. I think Hermione going to the US/ Pansy/ the mask/ leaving them in peril was all a bit much. It like an extra mini story tacked on the end.
But that is not to say I didn't enjoy every word of it. I loved your Beltane scenes - the idea of the runes expressing desires was inspired. I could wax on about this story all day but suffice to say I liked it very much indeed!
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. I loved the idea of Hermione being the one who holds the Hallows; Harry the hothead didn't deserve them. The transition from Jane to Hermione was done well. The ending and all the timeplay dragged a bit but it was forgivable. Overall I liked it as much as the rest of your stories and look forward to the next one.