rate_review Reviews

i wish it wasnt over!

I like how you took the basic elements of a "dramione" story - the fighting, the passion, suddenly attraction - and then altered them slightly to suit the plot (the hesitation after a brief make out, questioning motives rather than just falling into bed, the obliviate). It worked very well.

I enjoyed this story because of its ending. I like diversity when I'm reading fanfiction, even though in the back of my head I'm thinking, 'No!!! Get back together!' If you had put the everyday ending of happily ever after, it wouldn't have meant as much - at least not to me.

There were a few parts that I felt you used the wrong wording, but it was still a diamond in the rough. So many stories on this site fall under that category - but get overshadowed by those annoying 1000 word run-on paragraph stories written by eleven-year-old girls. Awesome tale, I'll be checking out your next one.

Thanks for sharing~!

so great. are you going to continue this?i hope so!!

Good start, and I hope the second bit comes soon. While Draco's turnabout seems a bit quick, given that you are trying to achieve your goal in a two-shot, you didn't really have any other options. Nice action sequence and the interior monologues of both don't seem forced. :D