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for How to Save a Life

by CassieBlack

person Diane
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*almost spits soda on her computer while laughing* Draco doing cartwheels. You could sell tickets to that. That chapter was so much fun. I loved it when Harry said that he'd been there before. I'm sure their faces were just priceless. I love it! Little grammar info, capitalize the first word in dialogue. It's like it's a sentence to itself. You're doing better, but that's still something I've noticed you don't do. Man I can't wait to see the riot that's going to be caused in the Great Hall. Better make sure they don't walk in durring dessert. Harry's likely to have pudding thrown at him or something. Hmm... Harry covered in pudding... *adds to happy thoughts*
person Leentjef
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very good chapter
keep going and post soon
bye bye
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gee! Ginny is a bitch. Thanks for the update.
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This will be intersting to see...a lion in the snake pit. Cant wait for more!
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh Ginny you little bitch. Gah. Stupid Weasleys. That is only for this story though. Cant wait for the next chappie though. Nellie
person Jan
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that something gruesomely terrifying is going to happen to Ginny, if not extremely painful? And to Ron and Hermione as well? :( Please!

Please update chapter 13 soon

Jan
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 13!!! Harry is in the Snake Pit!!! Holy moly!!! What does Ginny have planned?
person Diane
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Someone please beat Ginny and then toss her into the lake. Maybe the giant squid can squeeze some sense into the girl. You should look up some English grammar rules about dialogue. You do such a good job writing, it bothers me to see the simple mistakes in your work. You've done such a good job writing, I just want to cuddle poor Harry and keep him safe from everyone... right before I shove him in a closet with Draco. I can't wait to see "The Snake Pit" and Harry's welcome to it.
person Diane
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, history's repeating itself. Poor Harry. *giggle* But it was funny to have Harry and Draco playfully snarking (at least that's what I'd call it) infront of the the Headmistress.
person Dezra
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Harry. Is this going to be a Griffyndor against Harry fic and Harry being forced to abandon them? i hope not. He needs as many friends as he can to help the Slytherins, by the sound of it.

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