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very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye

I totally love that chapter. That might be my favorite yet. It's just so cavity sweet. I love it, especially that last little bit. You're writing's improved so much. You deserve cookies. One more grammar point for you. In dialogue, the name of the person you're talking to is seperated by commas from the rest of the sentence. "You should sit up, Harry, so Draco can be a pillow." Had to bring that up again. It's just so cute! And Nev's such a sweetie. However, Pansy should make the boys clean up, without magic, since they couldn't seem to help with the set up.

YEA!!!
you updated so quickly!! :) im so happy!
thank you thank you thank you!!
your the best...now the next chapter... :D

HOW SWEET
this was very very good chapter
keep going and post soon
bye bye

Ahhhh...a little fluff is good for the soul. Excellent chapter!

this is probably the best harry/draco fic ive ever read.

and trust me, i've read everything longer than 10 pages on this site, hpff.net, and ff.net

cant WAIT for the next part <33.

haha and sry this msg is so short and terse. both of my hands are asleep and im kind of just throwing them at the keyboard

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...damn it I need more now.

Wow. I bookmarked this at chapter 5. And I came back today to find 12 more (wonderful) chapters! Lucky me!!!. I loved the way you ended chapter 17, although I wish there was a little more action. lol. Please update again soon. I need some hott boy/boy action!!! :)

Oh Harry....hun you dont need to do that. Good chapter!

Oh no!!! Sooo need chapter 17!!! Someone needs to stop this!