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So she would know!!! Sooo need chapter 22!

Oh how wonderful!!! I sooo need chapter 21!!!

Hot! Hot! Hot! Hot! Hot! Hot! Hot! Hot! Hot! Hot! HOT!!!! Those two are delicious when they're together! Got of love them!

However, please tell me that Harry isn't going to forgive Ron for what he's done?! He definitely doesn't deserve any more chances with Harry. He's fucked up one to many time! You should feed him to Buckbead! ^_~

Please update chapter 21 soon. ^_^

Jan

you are the quickest updater EVER!! makes me so happy! :D
more please! the story is VERY good!

*claps* Awww aren't they so cute together? Yay for the fun action! I do however think the change in Harry's attitude toward his own sexuality and his comfort with intimacy with another male changed too quickly. I keep expecting him to have another incident like the one in the shower. That's of course just my opinion. That was a great cover on Harry's part. Draco would of course believe the worst about Buckbeak after he was a prat to the animal. You should give your chapters a read through some time. You have lots of typoes. Nothing that makes it hard to understand, but little things a beta should take care of. See you next chapter! *giggle* Yay for dry humping through clothes!

Its so good! Original and exactly to my tastes! You've read my mind! And the best part?... they still seem in character *gasp*! Keep going!

WOOOOOOO!!!!! About time! Someone smack Ron and then give him some chocolate frogs for giving just the kick they needed by being an ass. That was wonderful. I loved seeting Draco and Harry competing again. It's always so much fun. If you want to make characters stutter, you break up the letters with a hyphen. "S-s-sorry." The hyphen breaks the sounds rather than "Sssorry" which would have someone hissing. Oh! I remembered something I wanted to mention about the last chapter. You freaked the holy crap outta me. I listen to the audio books on my iPod on my way to class (it refreshes my memory about what happened) and I read the beginning of the last chapter just after listening to Harry and Dumbledore's trip to the cave. Back to this chapter. I was hoping Draco or Pansy would get him a new broom. *snicker* You didn't say this is how it happened, but I get a kick outta seeing Draco jump over the back of the couch, push the first year out of his way, and running to the door. It's that leap over the couch, though I'm sure that's not what happened, that amuses me. Keep going. You're doing a great job with this story.

Love this story! An they was kissing, at least! Can't wait for the new chapter ^^ Btw, cause this story I liked Pansy Parkinson ;) World is crazy xDD

very very good
keep going and post soon
bye bye

Good chapter!!! :)