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This is a great story so far please update.

This story is brilliant! I love it, please update soon! Could you please send an email to silverstorm1@hushmail.com whenever you upload a new chapter? Thanks :)

So far I really like this story--I hope you do more chapters--I would even proof them for you if you wanted.

i want more update plaese

I ONLY found out that you intend this to be a CrackFic through your responding to reviews. That's really something you should put in the summary. Because I went into this thinking it was supposed to be a serious HP fiction and its just so ridiculous.

I couldn't even make it past the second chapter. I was trying to follow you but the second all these possible wives showed up, I gave up. However, none of that is really important since this is supposed to be CrackFic.

However, I'd strongly suggest that you place CrackFic in the summary and move this over to 3somes/moresomes for sure. Because Harry and his harem of wives-to-be just doesn't fit in the Harry/Hermione category.

Please update again soon. THanks.

okay I really debated on if I should review or not. First you need to learn how to take critism. It is pretty obvious from your response to some of the reviews that all you want is for people to praise your work. That isn't realistic, it isn't possible to please everyone.
Next I have to say that I agree with the negative reviews. Your story is painful to read. In fact I couldn't get past the third chapter. Everyone is so out of character and shallow. It doesn't matter if you are working off the book or movie universe, there is no way that Harry would be happy being with girls who only want him for his stardom and/or for his money.

In closing a bit of advice. One if you don't want people to read this as a serious fanfic than you might want to lable this as a crackfic. That way people know going into it that it is meant to be over the top/spoof. Second you should seriously consider moving this to the threesome/moresome catagory.

well i really liked your story until harry was presented with the number of his wifes ok could have lived with that too maybe but after that you really started to overdoo it

sorry as i said i really liked the start but its to much wealth and all you are presenting harry with


also that the fiances all are without anyting ready to marry him well a little bit strange

dont to mention is castle and all

all that rooms sound like heaven for any 16 year old muggle but well they dont seem to fit into the hp universe and after all are to much

This isn't meant to be a serius Harry Potter fic, I'm just writing it for fun, that's why I decided to go a little too on top

Good update, a bit short but good none the less. Your keeping the story moving and I really wonder what twist or turn will come up next and how in the world is Harry going to deal with 9 women(LUCKY BASTARD) when they return to hogwarts and what other types of training will they undergo aside from what you have mentioned. Plz Update. CHEERS!!!