AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Shock Treatment

by AeroCherry

schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot another great fic from you! I loved A Seaside Retreat and this one looks just as promising! Please update me when you add another and future chapters!

Great work keep it up!
person nastygrl
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! That was sooo good!!! I can't wait to read the next chappie!
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter.

"... then again if he got into trouble for what he did the headmaster would need to call into question the obvious sexual tension between the werewolf and the weasel."

Ever the consummate Slytherin, eh?
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. I'm glad you went a little more into the RL/GW pairing too, since I have a soft spot for Remus. There were also some really funny lines too; I love stories with dark humor weaved into them. Can't wait for an update!
person Delfin
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woahh :D

cant wait to read more! :)
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think a threesome would be too much, considering Hermione's and Snape's temperaments and personalities in this story. You might as well let Ginny catch Remus though. Voyeurism at some point might work.
person DB1
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@3 OMG you have to update soon!!

*DB*
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg!! I'm glovin it so far! I think a 3some would be a bit much but how about a scene with ginny teaching hermione techniques in pleasing a man. I saw that someone suggested voyerism. I think that when ginny gets her claws into remus hermione should borrow harrys invisability cloak and sneak a peek. With ginnys permission of course!!
LOL!!!
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love your stories, seaside was extremely well done, but id really like to see snape/hermione exclusively and rather a bit of lemon between remus and ginny ;) Love your writing
Jocy