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by AeroCherry

schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved It!! God Golly Gosh, the new brazen Hermione is really swell!! (I spent the weekend watching beach-boyesk movies LOL) poor sev. Its an easy decision really as if an older man who turn down hot young ass! LMAO!!
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter! Hermione and Lily really do seem a lot alike. I wonder what will happen. Can't wait to read more.
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please udpate soon.
person Cara Sky
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great work! To be honest all I was expecting was some PWP but this new chapter certainly adds new dimensions. I think HG/SS just can't be thrown together in less than three chapters and I'm glad to see you're going to develop a deeper, more realistic relationship with them. I hope their sexual relationship will be realistic too, because even though Hermione has a new found confidence and Severus finds her sexy, they're not just going to start fucking like Ginny and Remus.
I think I got a little ahead of myself. I just really think this story has great potenial and I would hate to see it ruined by a hasty fuck like most of these stories go.
-Cara
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person goofball
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*chuckle* I must have a weird sense of humour but I can so relate to this feeling of saying "oh shit" after a great kiss.
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That might be because your writing is simply fabulous :)

And yes, though i do agree that at times it did feel a bit forced, the actual kissing was breath-taking !

I cant wait for more :) Once again i go to bed hoping to find a new chappie up when i wake up in the morning *G

Love
Jocy
person DB1
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@6 great chapter update soon

*DB*
person DB1
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@5 hot chapter update soon

*DB*
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!! I loved the wanton-ness of Ginny! Keep up the good work



P.s. Strange question but are you irish?? I just got the feeling whilst reading your A/N.