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for Shock Treatment

by AeroCherry

schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. I can just imagine them posing. ooh I can't wait to read the guys reactions!! Please continue with this story it has great potential!!
Much Love!!
person Myrna
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh..My..God!!!
The pictures idea is sooo nice! :)
Cannot wait to see Remus and Severus reaction...LOL!!
person areader
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very very nice :)
person bobbie
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, this is very good, you have got to write more and soon. I like this side of Snape. and a Hermione that is this forward is refreshing. keep up the good work. post more soon please.
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the pure sluttiness of it all. (dunno if tats a real word but it is now)
ROLF
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it last chapter when Hermione told Severus off the way she did, definatly made a 'stand out' point for this story. I did see 2 typos in this story it should have been 'her chest' not 'he chest' and he servived a war, not a ward. Don't feel bad, I do this a lot myself. So far I am enjoying this story very much!
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I disagree with your assesment that this chapter felt a bit forced. The whole story was set on the premise of a time scale (day one altered wardrobe....)so this chapter is fitting in quite well.
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice dear!
person DB1
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@8 hot chapter, update soon

*DB*