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for Not your fault

by sunset20

person Karen
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeet write more
person Anon
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad. please write another chapter or a sequel I want draco to be happy in the end, or at least have harry be as miserable as him.
person MrGalion
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not your best work...
I didn't shed a tear that time.. The tone feels different.
There is something else also that I can't put my finger on.
I do love all your work. Glad to See a new addition to your portfolio.

Honestly Me,
MR.Galwyrd Freyr Galion
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sad!!!!
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its sad but true with love. i liked it!
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story. it made me think and i like that. it's very depressing and all, but i guess i'm in the mood for such themes ;] i also like the way it's written, except maybe for some sentences being too long. it was hard to follow the story [or it could just be me being tired ^^"]
take care ;]