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REALLY GOOD STUFF. btw i imagine bella would have a bit of fun with hermione by gropping and maybe having hhaving her foot start rubbing behind hermione if she's sitting behind her during a class.

Chapter 6 is good.

it sets ava's attitude and builds character relationship like you said, nice work :D

yay! another chappy!!!! I am really happy with the new development. "Bella" should have to work for it and the things to come should be extremely interesting

i really liked this chapter. i love the hermione(ava)/bella banter. cant wait for more

This story is interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens. Ginny's knowledge of Hermione's sexual appitite is insightful. Wonder how this is going to play out. Hope you'll come back to this story some time. I always wondered what would happen if Bellatrix was changed, given a cause outside the one she found herself in.

This really is great. I'm thinking that the story will go by with that book giving more information to Ginny then Ginny wants to read about. Its kinda stupid but Hermione won't be able to take responsibility for cheating on Ginny since she won't even remember her and if she does cheat on her at all it has to be with Bella. I can't wait to read how they interact and what happens when she time travels. This story really has caught my interest and I hope that you'll come back when you can and finish it.

This story is amazing. I couldn't help but smile at the thought that Snape remembers Hermione now that he realizes what's going on. I'm really looking foward to seeing how this turns out and what happens when Hermione's in the past. Mostly I want to see how she forms friendships and who she forms them with. Oh and I really hope that you'll come back and perhaps when Hermione comes back to the future have her encounter or seek out Bella on her own...after she reads the journal. This is all assuming that Bella/Hermione(Ava) really bond and get together. But I think it'd be very interesting to see how this turns out because if Bella falls in love with Ava and Ava just disappears then Ava might be the reason Bella turns to the darkside in the first place. (This is my theory that I have tried to play out in several different instances.) But am interested in seeing where you take this. Please do come back when you can.

Well its definitly scary to see the story from Bella's point of view. Its an interesting concept to handle especially since I became used to seeing it in a nicer shade of gray then the black that Bella has addedto the story. Though her game with Malfoy is interesting I hope that somehow it won't remain a game when Ava/Hermione becomes truly involved. Ah...I'm a sucker for love...even if there isn't a happy ending.

It didn't go anywhere but you're right we kind of did need to know about Ava's point of view and how she sees Bella. I'm very interested in seeing how the conversation between Bella and Ava turns out. Ava might not be willing to freely admit it (thanks to the spells) but whatever Snape did to her mind has allowed her to retain some basic information about the people surrounding her. I'm glad that it has because it could come in handy later on. Please come back when you can. this story is amazing and I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take it.

Chapter 5 is amazing.
you are very talented,
and as i have said before,
i am jealous of your ability to write plot!

keep the chapters coming miss 11502 words!