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for The fine line...

by NymphetamineFixed

schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update plzzz
person Bella
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I will give you my first born if you update more *right now*
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Freaking sweet chapter man. Extremely hot, and I can't wait to see what you do next.

I have to say...I love the ass if you can work that in at all.

Keep up the good work!
person Anonymous
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very entertaining. Sex scene was well done and kept me interested. Converstion afterwards made me smirk. Can't wait to see where it goes. Will eagerly await your next story update.
person Crow
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stop worrying the smut was great. And, hot!!! I mean that was the goal, right? ;) I was really glad to see an update. More soon plz!!

"Then she was gone and Bella was left sitting alone in her room, just the way she liked it. Smug grin planted firmly on her face. Oh was she going to have some fun with this." <---I don't think she has a clue what's in store for her. }:)
person Guest
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic! keep up the good work and update soon ;)
person Mukuro Meki
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic so far, I look forward to the next chapter. I do have one quesion though, will there be blood play?
person Crow
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! you updated. I'm glad. ^_^ Thanks for the highly enjoyable story. Lemme just say the scene in the library? Hot, really hot. More plz!!!!
person RavenTiger
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is very very well-written. I can't wait to read what you write next. Update ASAP. Peace.
person That Guy
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading your story so far and i have to say im impressed, really good concept and well written (and not an over used storyline).
I look forward to reading more, update soon, i'll be on the lookout....
Laterz