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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Looking for more! I so love this change in hermione, love the darker side!!
-Shanika(Callisto)
-Shanika(Callisto)
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant! Update? Pretty please?
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May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story you're writing! I do hope you keep at it, and while I love and admired your dedication to giving a story everyone can enjoy please, pleeeeease don't let your fans affect YOUR story, it is still your story after all!
What happens to the characters, what they do, how they act, and the consequences of those actions are all yours to dictate, don't let the preferences of your audience decide how you write something out! Follow any thought, pursue any idea to it's fullest. Heck, if you think of more than one way for a chapter to go give them ALL to us Chapter 13 A Chpater 13 B Chpater 13 Y, W, or Z! Follow the story the way your mind tells you to, take your reviewer's words to heart but don't let them control the way you tell your tale! :)
What happens to the characters, what they do, how they act, and the consequences of those actions are all yours to dictate, don't let the preferences of your audience decide how you write something out! Follow any thought, pursue any idea to it's fullest. Heck, if you think of more than one way for a chapter to go give them ALL to us Chapter 13 A Chpater 13 B Chpater 13 Y, W, or Z! Follow the story the way your mind tells you to, take your reviewer's words to heart but don't let them control the way you tell your tale! :)
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May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
plzz update its realy good.
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May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is awesome. I think you are building up sexual tension wonderfully. I love the banter between Bella and Ava (Hermione), and I wonder how you are including Lily in this story...-perverted giggle-. My only complaint is that you don't update fast enough -pouts-, but I can understand why it takes so long to update so no pressure. I'm glad you are writing this pairing because it is one of my fave pairings and it isn't written as much as it should be in my opinion. I came here today and saw that you updated and I was happy to see that. =] Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First off I'd like you that I love the story so far. And from personal experance I can tell you got Ava spot on with the discovery of enjoying being beaten and hurt during the act. I really enjoy the fact that their learning how addicting something like that can be, but again I ask will there be blood play? I beleave that that might be the next step in Bella's rule over Ava. But then again you are the auther and its your story to write, here's hoping for an update soon
Mukuro
Mukuro
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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very Very Nice Story!! I really enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading the rest!!!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely one of my favorite Bellatrix stories I've read (and I've read too many for my own good). I like that Hermione/Ava stays in such control of her feelings even after she gives in and lets Bellatrix "win."
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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh this is getting good. Can't wait for your next chapter. Peace, Raven.
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you are continuing to update this story. You actually made me swoon for Bella. I hated her throughout the books and now I'm hot for her. Damn good job.