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I am so glad you added another chapie to this fic I wa starting to think you had abandoned it! Another well done chapter written in the sty;e I like most....romantic and sensual not outright porn!

You really are a creative author and I admire you greatly!

Well done!

OOPPS! I won't what she will think when she realizes. Maybe she will be happy. This is getting real good. please keep it coming.

And you did not disappoint! ::fans face:: Positively blistering story.
Writing is frakking hard work, and anyone who does it deserves feedback. Great job!

good job...very hot...

Hello Darlin'....so sorry it took me so long to read, but I did, just as I promised! You are doing wonderfully here, luv. Couple bits of advice....Always write your stories first and foremost for yourself. In the end the work that makes you happiest is the work you produced because it made YOU happy and you stayed true to the story. If your muse tells you that she is a virgin, then she is, dont change it. Not everyone is going to like everything you do, some will speak to people more than others will, but what matters most is that you stick to what your muse directs. Now that being said, it doesnt mean you cant take the advice given and tweak and twist here and there to make things flow more smoothly, or even to make a special reader happy, (utopia often gets indulged when she makes requests of me :) ) as long as it makes you feel like it is staying true to yourself.



Take constructive crticism for its benefits, those people who truly seek to offer you help in the right spirit will be clear. Take the flames and warm your tea ;)


Keep going Darlin', I will try to stay more up to date and review regularly, I promise.



Happy Writing
SG

Wheeee! How romantic was that! Very nice chappie and I hope the rest of the story is like that...I can't wait til the next update!

Well done!

Great so far, just out of curiosity, any idea how many chapters we can expect ?? I love long ones but sometimes the authors seem to go on forever and then you seem to lose track of it. Make it long enough but not too long and could you possibly update more often ? I love reading this fics but sometimes waiting for updates is like waiting for the other shoe to drop. Keep on writing, it is a really great story, love the ''Mine'' at the end of this last one.

that is so great. i am so hooked on this story. i check almost everyday for updates. i can't wait til the next posting.

I have been waiting with baited breath for more of this, loving it!! Good luck and thanks for the great writing.

I don't know if it's been mentioned, but it bothers me every time I see it. Your title should read "formerly" untitled NOT "formally" untitled. Good story by the way.