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for The Mentor

by wishyouwere

person jan
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im not very good at reviews but all i need to say is WOW exceptional story keep up the good work and by the way your writing severus in a way that i probably would if i had your gift of writing, Looking forward to the next update take care all the best jan
person Citten
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well things could turn bad fast now with weasley in the picture i do hope that they will get over their shared views of scaring each other off and just do it but then we would have no irratation and all stories need some of that! :)
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Another great chappie! I wonder why Ron is at Hogwarts? Dum de dum dum daaah!

I can't wait for the next chapter please update soon!
person mariteri
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! And so the plot twist arrives! Excellent story so far. I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the good work and update when you can.
person PhantomRose
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this sorry, i want more each time i read it!!! keep continuing with this story! it is very good! good luck XD
person ghzowy
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My god -- this is such a wonderful and erotic story. Keep it up.
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're right I did miss it and I am sort of ashamed to say I had forgotten about your work! (Spanky spanky fingers) But I'm glad I had three chappies to read. They were short but sweet and as ever well written. I'm sorry I forgot about this story but I won't from now on. I'll add it to my favourites file and check it periodically for updates.....unless you want to email me when you add another chappie....hint hint....LOL
person Jesse
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I am very impressed with this story. Poor Severus is going to get in trouble for not giving her that potion! Can't wait! :)
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person neelix
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So excited to come on here and find an update! And what an update!! Wonderful writing...and a cliff hanger!!! Hot too, naturally. Thanks!!! Keep writing, I am loving this.