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for The Mentor

by wishyouwere

schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do not see anything wrong with your disclaimer. It says that you do not own Harry Potter and that it is fiction. Also that you do not make any money from it. If you do decide to post elswhere please let me know where you do. Thanks, and it is a great story.
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story, please don't stop it.
person sevsgirl
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story."

This was copied from Ms_Figg's story. She posts here all the time and to my knowledge hasn't had a problem with the disclaimer issue.

Hope it helps.
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks sevsgirl,
I am starting to feel mildly rebellious, and do not want to change the stupid disclaimer...again! You read it...did it seem like any of those elements were missing? I just put them in a different order. Why don't they just have a standard set of disclaimers that gets tagged to every story?
And why am I spedning so much time on this when I have a story to finish? lol - wait for the next chapter - Harry finally makes an appearance.
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty hot! and i love how you have them both going to wear rings :)
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Citten
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter! i totally loved what merniva did that was awsome! :) i will be looking forward to the coming chapters!!! :) i was right though about it being that hermione was pregant. ;) i love how severus is he is so wonderful and sweet he also totally understands hermione! so lots more chapters to come right?! :) and soon?!
person Voracious reader
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter (19)and I'm flattered you'd want to quote what is basically an adaptation of something I remember one of my brothers saying; feel free, but I might use it too! Good to know we can add to the wizarding slang, LOL. The bonding scene was just lovely, and Minerva plotting like an interfereing mother-in-law was just perfect.