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by wishyouwere

schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HELLO! Nice to see you.

Story: Kick Ass! I'm slowly easing my way into Snape infested water, and I think I like it.

Disclaimer: You MUST say "I do not make any money." That is all you're missing.

Beta: YES! I would love nothing more than to have a beta! I would e-mail you, but the address is hidden. So please feel free to e-mail me. bubblegumdego@yahoo.com

person Steph
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If you are posting this fanfic somewhere else can u pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease tell me where, i love it.
person MomoDesu
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That disclaimer crap burns me. What burns me more is when they got me, instead of sending a message they left a damn review. It's not like my email isn't working properly. In a way I understand putting it as a review, but in a way it almost felt humiliating to me. *raises hand* Classic childhood overachiever, easily embarrasses over public reprimand.

Here's a disclaimer that I pretty much use for any fandom at all, and seems to cover it well enough for the admin not to get their knickers in a twist: [Insert fandom here] and all related characters and situations are property of [insert author/whatever here]. I am not profiting from this in any way.

Don't let them get you down. If you get too peeved and move the story somewhere else, would you mind emailing me and letting me know where? I've really enjoyed this story :)

-Momo

person Lydia
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story and hope you update soon. i hope you don't pull the story, but if you do could you please let me know where it will be so i may finish it. i love your writing.
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My theory is to copy someone else's who has written many stories on this website.

ie: Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

This is the most commonly used disclaimer I have seen by authors.

I hope it works out, I would hate to loose you!!!
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, with the disclaimer I forgot. Loving the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, your disclaimer seems fine to me.

I wrote a story a long time ago and posted it here, you are more than welcome to use mine:

"Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story. "

person Angie30
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodness knows I've had to re-written those darn disclaimers more then once if you would like feel free to use mine....Disclaimer: I don
person MistressAmortencia
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(In response to your disclaimer)


They did this to my story a while back as well. I think that perhaps if you stated specifically that Harry Potter belongs to JKR it may satisfy their (quite ridiculous) scruples. I would hate to see you leave as I am enjoying your writing very much and hope that this works for you.

-MA
person Citten
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
honey you are doing better and more professional disclamers then most writers, so 'screw' (excuse the french) others who are making you feel that you have not done it right. granted i am no writer but you are doing just as everyone else is that you dont own any characters or making any money that you are just writing a story set in alternate universe. maybe that is what they are refering to the fact that it is not following cannon and wish you to just add that it is au. other than so serious messed up people---i loved the last chapter!!!!! :) i am so totally glad that you said about minerva i feel the same way about her. i think jk did a great job of her charater, she makes me think of my own grandmother. :) i loved the dinner secne and i really enjoyed their evening with them! :) i will tell you this though if you do decide to go somewhere else PLEASE let me know cause i would love to read the rest of your story despite what others are telling you or making you feel, i love your story sweety! :) so i hope that you keep on writing!