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for The Mentor

by wishyouwere

schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is very, very good. I was a little surprised to see a story without a title, but once I started to read it, I found that it dosen't need a title. The suspense is great, I can hardly wait to read more.
person Carine
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi wishyouwere(here)?(mine)?,
your story is quite interesting.So Snape wants to be a mentor for Hermione.The question now is a menor for teaching or...anything else.I cannot wait to read more.(((H)))Sureves Epans
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so far so.....great! i love it so far
person ElenSila
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm intriqued, I would like to see where this goes. My suggestion for a title is "Battle Begets Love". Elen
person chyara
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good start looking forward to more.
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well it definitely a great start and I can't wait to read more! Hope you can update again soon!