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I'm very intrigued, lol I absolutely loved the interaction with Snape and Hermione. Brilliant work. Hope to read more soon.

Hum...it's getting better and better! :)
GeeZ.. We can say what we want but the fact is that, indeed, Severus Snape is hot!!
I like your story..cannot wait to the other chapters!! ^^

so far so good, and I definately think that "mentor of the heart" would be a good title. however, if this story goes into bdsm, perhaps "master, mentor, friend" or "master, mentor, lover" would be a little better.

oh my, i just read the 3 chapters n its good =D

keep em coming :D

Holy Smoke.........who wouldn't melt with Severus that close and flirting.......
Beautifully written, really enjoying this.

Oh wow I really like the direction in which this story is going! I skipped this fic half a dozen times before I dived in because I absoloutely hate stories titled 'Untitled' I actually read the eviews before I read the fic and the enthusiastic reactions is what inspired me to read. Grammar and word flow is excellent but the chapters are way too short! I know as the author it's totally up to you how long each chapter will be...and maybe I'm just being picky. I write long chapters because I like reading long chapters. Apart from that I have no criticism al all!

I think this fic could turn into a classic romantic story and I hope you will continue on with it!

Please email me when you add the next and future chapters! (My email adress is in my profile).

Keep up the good work!

Ok, Chapter 3...HOTT!!! Love it, love it! Please continue!

I'm loving this!
Please update...
RIGHT NOW! lol!
Looking for a title?
How about "Teaching the Teacher?"
Just a suggestion I came up with randomly.
Love the story!

I have just read the three chaptes you have up and am enjoying it. I hope you find a worthy title soon. I look forward to more soon.

Red

::Bounces excitedly:: I love where this is going,i cant wait to read more. Still no title though? if i may offer my humble idea... something like The Merits of Mentoring. (is that even spelled right?) Oh well keep up the excelent work.