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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, your story is the reason I finally registered so I could review. Love the premise and plot. I especially like that you have kept Snape true to himself and his darker desires. It's hard to find great fanfiction, but The Mentor definitely classifies as such. Please, tell us some more of the story...
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your unofficial title, The Mentor. It's simple and explanatory. Maybe "Hermione's Mentor"?
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is so good. i love the way it is going. i can't til you post more.
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 10: sweet! irrigardless of the infinity.....what???? typo!
pet your plot bunnies for their great job.
pet your plot bunnies for their great job.
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You bugger! You're right I do want to kill you!..LOL
That is the meanest way possible to end a chapter...how could you do that to me?....he he.
Anyway great chapter and I hope SOMETHING will happen if you get my drift...he he
That is the meanest way possible to end a chapter...how could you do that to me?....he he.
Anyway great chapter and I hope SOMETHING will happen if you get my drift...he he
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very Sweet
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh woweeeee! I love this story and they way you add just the right amount of sexual tension. Can you email me when you add the next chapter? (Which I'm sure will be steamier than a sauna...LOL)
Great work I love it!
Great work I love it!
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wahoo, that was HOT. i love LightDarkSeverus ;) the best there is!! And i cant wait for him to show our Hermione exactly what he means ;)
LOVE IT
Thank you
Jocy
LOVE IT
Thank you
Jocy
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know I'm a spoil sport but somehow I couldn't quite imagine Hermione reacting the way she did since you have her as still being a virgin. And I'm not saying it's not hot what they're doing, not at all ;o) anyway, looking forward to seeing more :o)
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2.....Awwww Severus...ever the actor!
bravo, and now i'm off to chapter 3 and beyond!
bravo, and now i'm off to chapter 3 and beyond!