rate_review Reviews

OMG! I totally agree with the previous reviwer, i thought this was going to be a fun H/Hr smut to read, but it turn out to be so disgusting and sick. I regret even clicking to read this story in the first place.

This was a little bit disgusting and it kind of made my stomach churn.

Graphic violence and ickiness aside, you do write well. And it is a very original story. Good work on those aspects! :-)

F*cking sick story.

what the hell>>> ((O_O))




I mean what. the. hell??!!





(Although I commend you for flipping the story around 180 and turning it into a rape filled sci-fi horror-fest. Highly amusing, if not slightly outputing. hehehe)

ROFL. What an incredible piece of shit.

LOL i loved the spell he used.. or tried to anyway.

Hey, you should really think about putting up a warning on this story, because after reding the description that wasn't what I expected. I don't want to affront you or anything, but please think about it. The story isn't really my thing (mostly because I like harry and don't want to see him hurt) but it is good written and you are a good author. Don't let any of the idiots, who are against slash (I think, even if you write about harry and hermione, the story still borders slash) put you down. Please think about putting on a warning, so that everyone knows what to expect. You would also get more reviews of people, who are interested in your kind of story. Without a warning you would get more people, who are into something else and the people who would be interested in it don't find or read it. I hope you think about what I wrote and don't understand me wrong I don't want you to put the story down or stop writing, just please put on a warning like rape or something like that, so that the people know what you mean with "if you're into this stuff". Well I hope I could help you.

It wasn't badly written... I just wasn't expecting something like... well... that... I think that you need to put more warnings on it (like rape and such) to target readers that would be more interested in this type of fic

But you ARE a good author... so continue writing :)

> Delicious Harry/Hermione smut. I promise, if you're into this stuff, you'll love it!

You broke your promise! I'm really into Harry/Hermione smut, but this was easily the most disgusting stuff I've read in this compartment. It's just as disgusting like Harry/Draco, Harry/Snape, Hermione/Ron, Hermione/Snape, Hermione/Draco ... you get the meaning?

This was really a lousy start in the new week for me. Thanks!

....wow i kinda, really wow, it was a bit vulgar and really offputting, i guess that the whole hermaprodite thing didn't really get to me but whatever floats your boat, still it was more brutal then smutty, basically harry getting anal raped.