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I like it. Please update soon.

A interesting start, I look forward to read more so update soon!!!

Chapter 1: This is an intriguing start and I don't mind a lighthearted Lucius and Severus at all. I'm eager to see: 1) how Lucius gets past all the aurors 2) what he did to make it necessary to get past guards to see her 3) what Snape did to make the problem in the first place.

The backstory of Snape and Hermione becoming friends of sorts is very believable to me. One always thinks Snape can't be as one-dimensional as he's painted in the books and films. And of course I like that the two wizards are friends too, and Snape is even willing to go out on some kind of limb for Lucius, abetting him as a lookout.


I hope this plot bunny grows up to become a rabbit and we see its cottontail at the end. You've got two stories going. I'd like to find out what happens in both of them.

Great start! This sounds like it's going to be oodles of fun...I can't wait for more!

Good first chapter. I really like the whole Sev/Hermione friendship idea. Nice. Please write more.

Wow! Great story so far - i love the sarcasm;

Lol poor Lucius. This man can never catch a break when it comes to Hermione. I truly see that she is going to make him work for her love. Great job. Please add more soon

Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.

don't keep us hanging!...lol

Oooh... can't wait to see where this goes. Great opening, I like how you've already set up the personalities and given us an intriguing backstory. Now let's see if I get to be the first to review... ;)